Week 7B

In class today we had critique on our final websites. This is the feedback from top to bottom that I was given on my website:

• Logo:
• Possibly more hierarchy with the width of the font and logo or the same width with the font and logo because it does not feel connected.
• Connect the lines in the logo more because in some places they are not connected.
• Also make the background on the top a png file so the lines go away.
• Style:
• Lighten turquoise picture to match the lightness of the other picture.
• Steps:
• Maybe have the spoon go in the jar, but someone else said they like it the way it looks now.
• Explore more with the throw picture as it doesn't connect with the other pictures.
• Use a different typeface for the descriptions or a lighter version of the typeface for the descriptions.
• Make sizes different with the steps or switch around where the titles are (put them where the descriptions are)
• Thin out the width of the lines in the picture for Done to match the other pictures.
• More space at the bottom of the icons
• Overall explore different colors or fonts for the titles of things

Week 7A

We did not have class due to the fall break.

Week 6 Outside of Class

I distanced the drips, but it still looks off with the logo so I will work on fixing that. I also changed the overlay and will ask others opinions in class Wednesday.

Finished project:

Week 6B

In class I tried distancing the drips as said in the critique, but that didn't look right so instead I made the band bigger height wise. I also took the logo out of the circle and made the text and logo relationship more equal and bigger. I also changed the overlay so the wording has a shadow and could be visible with the product.

Week 6A

Today we had a critique on 50% of our websites. The class and professor gave me great feedback. I got feedback on the header and to distance the drips, so it would not take away from the rest of the project. Also I need to fix my logo and take it out of the circle so that text is more readable and the focus on the website. I should also find a better color for the type, maybe grey or something lighter than what I have now. Then for the "Styles" I need to take out the color on the overlay so the product can be seen with the title.