Week 7B

In class today we had critique on our final websites. This is the feedback from top to bottom that I was given on my website:

• Logo:
• Possibly more hierarchy with the width of the font and logo or the same width with the font and logo because it does not feel connected.
• Connect the lines in the logo more because in some places they are not connected.
• Also make the background on the top a png file so the lines go away.
• Style:
• Lighten turquoise picture to match the lightness of the other picture.
• Steps:
• Maybe have the spoon go in the jar, but someone else said they like it the way it looks now.
• Explore more with the throw picture as it doesn't connect with the other pictures.
• Use a different typeface for the descriptions or a lighter version of the typeface for the descriptions.
• Make sizes different with the steps or switch around where the titles are (put them where the descriptions are)
• Thin out the width of the lines in the picture for Done to match the other pictures.
• More space at the bottom of the icons
• Overall explore different colors or fonts for the titles of things